Novel Ponder 10

Kia ora bloggers, Leo here

I think this is a amazing book. I really like this book beacuse it can show how somtimes dreams can come true. I think people that would like this book are pepole who wotk in the zoo. What do you think?

BYE

My Veiw From Above Writing

Kia Ora bloggers 

 

In this writing section we had to fix this sick sentence. It was based of a group of skydivers the top sentence is the sick one and the bottom one is the non sick one. Another thing i did was wriiting in the past tense. Do you like my sentences?

They were in a circle. He held on tight. The wind rushes past.
They were in a tight circle. He held on with all his might. The wind rushed past him at speed.